十句話搞定讀后續寫7課件高三英語二輪復習專項

十句話搞定讀后續寫7

十句五定法第二節(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Whenmydaughtersreachedthethirdandfourthgrades,Isometimesallowedthemtowalktoandfromschoolaloneiftheweatherpermitted.Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedthemhomeafterschool.Ithadshortlegsandlovelylongears.ItwasthecutestdogIhadeverseenandthegirlsbeggedmetokeepit.Thedogwasabouttwelveweeksold.Ithadnocollar(項圈)oridentifyingmarksofanysort.Ididn'tknowwhattodo.IthoughtaboutpostinganadvertisementbutIreallydidn'twantto.Itwouldbreakthekids'heartsifsomeoneshouldshowup.Besides,itsownershouldhavewatcheditmoreclosely.

Bytheendoftheweekthedogwaspartofourfamily.Itwasveryintelligentandgoodwiththegirls.Thefollowingweeksomethingtoldmetocheckthelostandfoundsectioninthelocalpaper.OneparticularadvertisementjumpedoutatmeandmyheartbeatwithfearforwhatIread.Someonewasbeggingforthereturnofalostdogintheneighborhoodofourgradeschool.Theysoundedextremelyeager.MyhandshookandIcouldn'tbringmyselftopickupthepaper.Instead,IpretendedIhadn'tseentheadvertisement.Iquicklyputthepaperawayinthedrawerandcontinuedwithmydusting.Ineversaidawordaboutittothekidsormyhusband.Bynowwehadnamedthedog.ItlookedlikeaMolly,sothatwaswhatwecalledit.Itfollowedthegirlseverywheretheywent.Whentheywentoutside,itwasonestepbehindthem.Whentheydidthehousework,itwastheretolendahand.

Therewasonlyoneproblemwiththisseeminglyperfectpicture:myconscience(良心)wasbotheringme.IknewinmyheartIhadtocallthatnumberinthepaperandseeifourMollywasthedogtheyweredesperatelyseeking.ItwasthemostdifficultthingIhadeverdone.注意：1．續寫詞數應為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。

Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.

IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.

[前文大意]

這篇短文講述了一位母親在女兒們放學帶回一只走失的小狗后，因不忍心看到孩子們傷心，沒有主動尋找失主，而是將小狗留下并取名為Molly。然而，她在報紙上看到一則急切的尋狗啟事后，內心備受良知煎熬。盡管她一度將報紙藏起、假裝沒看見，但最終良心占了上風，她決定撥通那個電話，去確認家中的Molly是否正是別人苦苦尋找的狗。人物母親、兩個女兒、小狗Molly，失主（未出場）

情節女兒帶回小狗

母親隱瞞失主廣告

良心不安

決定打電話

核心沖突

隱瞞vs歸還

情感基調

喜悅+害怕+愧疚+不舍+釋然母親面臨的兩難選擇是什么？環節內容起因兩個女兒放學時，一只小狗跟著她們回家了。發展1母親發現報紙上有尋狗啟示，心里很害怕。發展2母親選擇假裝沒看見，并把報紙藏起來。轉折母親的良心開始折磨她。承接母親終于拿起電話。[續寫思路]1．段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“懷著復雜的心情，我最終拿起了電話。”可知，第一段可描寫母親撥通電話后與失主的對話過程，確認小狗正是對方丟失的，并約定見面歸還。②由第二段首句內容“我請那位女士進來，她迅速彎下腰，緊緊地抱住了Molly。”可知，第二段可描寫失主認領小狗時的感人場景，以及母親和孩子雖然不舍但選擇誠實歸還的心理變化2．續寫線索：撥通電話——確認身份——約定見面——失主上門認領——孩子不舍——溫暖結局——感悟升華十句五定法paragraph11銜接para1提示句（接著para1首句往下寫）2345銜接para2提示句（根據para2首句倒推寫）paragraph26銜接para2提示句（接著para2首句往下寫）789

結尾（正能量）10

升華主題寫剩余五句補齊細節情緒動作心理語言環境描寫Para1.Para2.定

句1:銜接提示句--心理/動作鏈定句6:銜接提示句--心理/動作鏈句2:句7:句3:句8：句4:定句9:緊貼原文，交代結局定句5:過渡到P2首句定句10:點睛兩段十句五定法的思路其中第一段中的句1與句5，第二段中的句1，句4和句5共五句話基本是固定的，其他的句子安排根據具體情況可作輕微調整。para1：Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para2:IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________電話里說什么？失主的反應？根據第二段提示句可知失主上門來了。失主進家后發生了什么？結局怎樣？第一句話：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二句話：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接段首句“拿起了電話”，電話接通，失主反應。描述小狗，失主確認。Awoman

answeredafterthefirstring,hervoicetremblingwithhope.十句五定法：Idescribedthedogindetail,andsheimmediatelycriedout,“That’smybaby!”第三句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________失主原諒并上門。To

mysurprise,sheforgavemegentlyandsaidshewasjustgratefultoknowMollywassafe.Withinthirtyminutes,shewasknockingatourdoor.母親內疚道歉。Iapologizedfornothavingcontactedherearlier,explainingthatmydaughtersloveditvermuch.第五句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第六句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接第二段段首句“擁抱小狗”，小狗的反應。The

littledogstartedwaggingitstailandbarkingexcitedly,lickingherfaceasifalong-lostfriend.失主表達感謝。The

womantoldmethatshecouldn’tsleepwellwithoutMollyandexpressedhersinceregratitudetousfortakinggoodcareofMollythesedays.Sheofferedtogivemesomecashasareward,第七句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第八句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________母親婉拒。孩子表達不舍。Igently

refused,sayingwedidn’tdoitformoney.Justthen,mydaughterssteppedforward,oneofthemwhispering,“Canwestillvisithersometimes?”第九句話：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第十句話：_______________________________