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專題10讀后經(jīng)寫
【精選真題()1]
(2022?南京師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)高二期末)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成?篇完整的短文,續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為
150左右。
Itwasmid-December,andthetemperaturewasachillyminus20-degreeCelsius.Iwalkedwithmyheaddown,
passingthehomelessbeggarsandignoringallofthemasusual.ThenIsawhim.sittingagainstabuilding,wrapped
inthincloth,holdingawhitecupinfrontofhim.Iheardhisshaky,pitifulvoicetargetmeasIspedpasthim.
“Sparesomechange?''heasked.'THappreciateit.”
Ididn'tevenbotherlookingupathim.Inmymind,Ibrieflypicturedhimwalkingintotheclosestpuband
drinkingwhiskywithwhatevermoneyhemanagedtoget.Or,maybeheneededanothershotofcocaine.See,like
mostpeopleinthecity,ittookmeonlymomentstopassjudgementonhislife.
“Ihavenomoneyonme.''Isaidquickly.
Lookingback,Ifeelasthoughfatehadsetoutthatdaytoteachmealesson.Anditsucceeded.Justafewfeet
pas:him,Islippedonapieceoficconthesidewalk!Ilandedsquareonmyrightknee.Theacutepainpassed
throughoutasIlayontheground.ThenIheardafamiliarvoiceonlyinchesaboveme.
“Areyouallright?”heasked.
Iknewimmediatelythiswastheman1hadjustrushedpast.Beforetearswelledupinmyeyes,Isawthe
smooth,sympatheticlookinhiseyes.
IheldhishandasIstruggledtogettomyfeet.HeheldmyarmasIlimped(一病一拐地走)totlienearbybus
stopandsatonthebench.
“MynameisMike,“hesaidwithconcern."Thatwasquiteafallyoutook,andyoureallyneedtoseea
doctor.^^
“Thisbusgoespastthehospital/'Isaidquickly,pointingtothebussignaboveme.
Mikepaused,andalookofsuddenrealizationcrossedhisface.Hepulledouthissmallwhilecupanddumped
allthechangeintohishand.
“Iknowyoudon'thaveanychangeonyou,“hesaid,<4Ithinkthisisjustenoughforyoutotakethebus.”
:主怠:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15()左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
IwasovercomewithguiltasIrememberedthelieIhadtoldhimonlyafewminutesearlier.
“Thankyou,“hesaidgratefullywhenthebuswasapproaching.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】
本文講述的是作者一開始以貌取人,妄下判斷,不愿施舍一名男子,后來因?yàn)樽约菏軅玫竭@名男子
的幫忙而對(duì)他另眼相看,并且作者除了留了坐公交的錢之外,把身上所有的錢都給了那名男子。
【參考范文】
IwasovercomewithguillasIrememberedthelieIhad101dhimonlyafewminutesearlier.AtthatmomentI
realizedthatstandinginfrontofmewassuchakindandsincereman,differentfromwhatIhadjudged.1turned
awayfromhisofferinghand,pulledoutmywalletanddumpedmyownchangeintothepalmofmyhand.Ifelt
Mike,seyesonincasIcountedthro.ighthemoneythatIhadtoldhimdidn'tevenexist.Ikeptenoughmoneyfor
myselftotakethebustothehospitalandthendroppedtherestintoh:swhitecup.Itwasworthatleast10dollars.
“ThankyouJhesaidgratefUHywhenthebuswasapproaching.Itwassoniceofhimtoreachoutonehandto
helpmestandup,withtheotherhandholdinghiscuptightlytohischest.Asthebussloweddowninfrontofme,I
tumedaroundtoMike,saying,“Youtakecareofyourself.Itiscoldcutside.MFiveminutesago,Icouldn'thave
caredabouthimatall."Iwill,“hesmiledbrightly.*4Andyoutakecareofyourleg."Ilimpedontothebusandtook
aseatbythewindow.Imurmuredtomyself."Thankyouforwhatyouhavetaughtme!^^
【精選真題02]
(2022?蘇州中學(xué)高二期末)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容利所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文,續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為
150左右。
Lastyear,IspentmyholidayinanunfamiliarneighborhoodinLakewood,NewJersey.Werentedahouseso
(hatsomeofourchildrenandgrandchildrencouldjoinus.Everyoneintheareawassuperfriendly,offeringtocome
tointroducethemselvestousandtoensurethatwewouldmakefulluseoftheirhospitality,whethertoborrow
somethingor(osendthekidstoplayintheiryards.Wewereexcitedandimpressedandimmediatelybegantoseeif
therewereanyhousesforsaleintheneighborhood!
Thenextdoortouswasparticularlyfascinating(tovisitnottobuy).Intheyard,therewasatenniscourt,a
swingsetandvarioustoysandgamesthatwereparticularlypopularwithyoungchildren.Theownerwasalsovery
friendlyandinvitedthekidstocomeoverandplay.
Theydidn'thavetobeaskedtwice.Theyplayedforhoursonend.Whilewerelaxedinouryard,perhapsa
littletoocomfortable,perhapsenjoyingeachother'scompanyalittletoomuch,perhapsforgetting(haiyoung
childrencan'tbelefttoolongwithoutadultslookingafterthem.
Apparently,asmallfightbrokeoutbetween(heboyofthenextdoorandoneofmyfive-year-oldgrandsons.
My10-ycar-oldgrandsonimmediatelyjumpedtohiscousin'sdefenseandpushedtheotherboy.Atthispoint,the
mothernextdoorwasforcedtointervene(調(diào)停).
Andtheneighborcameovertospeaktous.NowwhenItrytoimaginemyself:inthatposition,Iimagineall
sortsofnegativeandaggressivewaystodealwithit-Iwouldhavebeenveryangryandcomplainedaboutthe
badbehaviorofthesevisitingchildren,anddefinitelysentthemhome.
Paragraph1:
Whatshedidwasquiteopposite.
Paragraph2:
Honestly,Iowedmythankstotheneighbor.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】
這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章講述了作者帶著家人以及孫子在新澤西州某處度假,因?yàn)榇笕诉^干放松享受,
沒有照看好孩子,孩子之間發(fā)生了沖突。作者的孫子推了庭院主人的孩子。作者想著如果自己是庭院主人,
她一定會(huì)嚴(yán)厲責(zé)罵孩子。
【參考范文】
Paragraph1:
Whatshedidwasquiteopposite.Shewassokind,friendlyandcalm.Shespokeof(heirgreatpleasurein
sharingbackyard,andofthenecessityofmonitoringourchildren'sbehavior.Shetoldherchildrenwewereailtheir
guestsand(hatweshouldberespectedandgivenspecialtreatment;otherwise,ashosts,theyweretoblame.After
that,thesechildrengotalongwellasbefore.Thekidswereimmediatelybroughthomebutthenextdaytheywere
welcomedtoplay.
Paragraph2:
Honestly,Iowedmythankstotheneighbor.Smallasheractionsmayseem,theywerebiginoureyes.The
neighbornotonlyletallthechildrenkeephappybutalsotaughtmeanunforgettablelessonindealingwith
relationships.Fromher,Ilearnedsomegoodskillsingettingalongwithothers.Smallandkindactionscanbring
warmthtopeople.Weshouldpassthemontoourchildrenandgrandchildren.
【精選真題01】
(2022.如皋一中高二期末)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150
左右。
Iwasataxidriver,afatherofa16-year-oldboyatthattime.Mysonwasgoodatschool,andhewould
graduatefromseniorhighschoolandgotouniversity,buthewashesitatingtochoosehisfuturejobandhealways
changedhismind.Ididgivehimadvicebuthedidn'tfollowit.AndoneMondaymoming,IstoppedatNewYork
HospitalwhenIfoundawell-dressedmancoiningover.Hewaswavingtome.Iwaitedpatientlyuntilhejumped
intothetaxi.t4LaGuardiaAirport,please."Hesaid.
Asalways,Iwonderedaboutmypassenger.SoIasked,“Whatdoyoudo?”"Iamworkingatthehospital.''
Forsonicunknownreason,Idecidedtoaskforhishelp.
“CouldIaskafavor?^Hedidn'tansweratfirst.ButIcontinued,t4Ihaveason,16.He'sdoingwellinschool.
Hewillgraduatefromseniorhighschool.Hewantsajobthissummer.Isthereanypossibilitythatyoumightget
hiirasummerjob?”Afteraminute,hesaid,“Themedicalstudentshavearesearchproject.Maybehecouldfitin.
Havehimsendmehisschoolrecords/5Hesearchedhispocketandhandedmeacard.
Thatevening,whenIgothome,Ipulledthecardfrommypocket."Robbie,“Isaidproudly,t4Thiscouldbea
summerjobforyou.Sendhimyourschoolrecords."Robbietookthecardandreaditoulloud,“FredPlum,New
YorkHospital.^^“Isthisajoke?^^hesaidindoubt.AfterIshoutedandthreatenedtocutoffhispocket-money.
Robbiepromisedtosendoffhisgradesthenextmorning.
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
Paragraph1:
Twoweekslater,whenIarrivedhome,thewholefamilywaitedformeexcitedly.
Paragraph2:
Robbiegotthejobanddidwellatthehospital.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】
本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。本文講述了作者為讓兒子確定自己未來的工作,讓孩子申請(qǐng)一個(gè)暑期工作,
并因此改變孩子未來的故事。
【參考范文】
Twoweekslater,whenIarrivedhome,thewholefamilywaitedmeexcitedly.Extremelyproud,myson
handedmealetterfromPlum,tellinghimhewasacceptedbytheprcjcct.Asitturnsout,hehadsenthisschool
recordstothehospitalthenextdayafterIgavehimthecard.AndhegotaphonefromPlum'ssecretaryforan
inteniew.Hewasconcernedabouttheresult,asaresultofwhich,hedidn'ttellthefamilywhathappened.
Robbiegotthejobanddidwellatthehospital.Infact,RobbiedidsowellthatPlumphonedme,singinghigh
praiseforhim.Whenthesummerjobended,hemadeuphismindtobeadoctor.Withaclearaiminhismind,
Robbieworkedevenharder.Eventually,hewasadmittedtoNewYorkMedicalCollege.Muchtoinyamazement,a
strangershouldchangemyson'sfiiture.
【精選真題02】
(2022?金陵中學(xué)高二期末)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Whetherwenoticeitornot,ourchildisalittlereflectionofourselves,theygrowuplookingmoreandmore
likeus.Theyevenhavesimilarpersonalitiesandhobbies.Andinsomecases,thestandardofchoosingagood
friend.
Oneday,my10-year-oldJanesaid,“Mom,Imadeanewfriendatschooltoday.Canshecomeover
toirorrow?”IlerwordsmademeextremelyhappybecauseJanewasashygirlandIwantedhertomakesome
friendstobringheroutofhershell.
“Sure,honey,thatsoundsgreat/'Isaid,thinkingbacktomyownchildhoodbestfriend,Susan.Welived
acrossthestreetfromeachotherinWashingtonHeights,NewYork.Wemetattheageof10,(oo.Likemy
daughter.Iwasshyandhadtroublemakingfriends.ButSusandrewmeout.Shewasoneof(hefriendliestpeople
inschool,withshinyblackhairandamile-widesmile.ThankstoSusan.Iwashappyeveryday.
Inseniorhighschool,SusanwentonatriptoFlorida.Thiswasthefirsttimewehadtobeawayfromeach
otherfbrafewdays.”「11bebacksoonandIwillwritetoyouassoonasIarrive."shetoldme.ButIdidn'tgether
phonecallnorreceiveanymailfromher.Soon,myfamilymovedtoNewJersey,makingmyhopeofseeingSusan
impossible.
WheneverIthoughtofhim.tearscameintomyeyes.
ThenextdayJanebroughthernewfriendhome."Hi,Mrs.Smith.,5thelittlegirlsaid.Herhairwassoshiny
andblackandshegavemeabigsmile."MynameisJo.Mymomwillpickmeup2hourslater.”
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter'snewfriendlookedsofamiliar.
Paragraph2:
Twohourspassedreallyquickly,andtherewasaknockonthedoor.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】
這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。
【參考范文】
Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter'snewfHendlookedsofamiliar.ButIwassurethatIhadnevermetJo
before.Shetoldme(hatherfamilyjustmovedfromLosAngeles,whichpuzzledmeevenmorebecauseIhadnever
beentoLosAngelesandwehadnorelativeslivinginLosAngeles,ether.Iconvincedmyselfthatitwasonlymy
imagination.Thetwogirlsgotonverywellandtheygiggledfromtimetotime.Iwatchedthemplayandfeltso
happyformydaughterfromthebottomofmyheart.
TwohourspassedreallyquicUy,andtherewasaknockonthedoor.ItwasJo'smomcomingtopickherup
laterthatafternoon.Onseeingherface,Iwasshocked.uJudy^^^shecried."It'sme,Susan!”Weembracedeach
other.Itturnedoutthatherfather'scompanysenthisfathertoLosAngelesbeforetheysettledinFlorida.Shetried
callingmelaterbutwehadmoved.Thetwolittlegirlswerehappytoseetheirmothersbecamegoodfriendsatonce
beforewetold(hemourstory,withhappytearsrollingdownourcheeks.
【解析】
通過閱讀所給文章可知,作者的女兒Jane想要邀請(qǐng)自己的朋友來家里,這讓作者想起了自己童年時(shí)的
好朋友Susan,回憶了當(dāng)初和Susan相處的事情,后來因?yàn)樽髡甙峒揖蜎]能再和Susan見面。第二天Jane把
新朋友帶回家,小女孩說自己叫J。,她媽媽兩個(gè)小時(shí)后來接她。
續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,第一段開頭是:我很困惑,因?yàn)槲遗畠旱男屡笥芽雌饋砗苊媸臁K院笪膽?yīng)該是講述
作者對(duì)于覺得J。面熟的困惑,以及看到J。和Jane兩個(gè)女孩相史得很好,作者從心底里為女兒感到高興。
第二段開頭是:兩個(gè)小時(shí)過得真快,有人敲門。本段應(yīng)該寫Jo的媽媽來接J。,作者發(fā)現(xiàn)正是Susan,Susan
曾經(jīng)聯(lián)系過作者,但作者一家已經(jīng)搬走了。兩個(gè)小女孩也很為他們高興,Susan和作者都留下了快樂的淚水。
最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15()左右。
【精選真題03】
(2021.南京六校高二期末聯(lián)考)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文.
Alittleboyalmostthoughtofhimselfastheunluckiestchildintheworldbecausepoliomyelitis(小兒麻痹癥)
madehimunabletowalklikenormalpeople.Heseldomplayedwithhisclassmates,andwhentheteacherasked
hiirtoanswerquestions,healwaysloweredhisheadwithoutaword.
Onespring,theboy'sfatheraskedforsomeyoungtreesfromtheneighbor.Hewantedtoplanttheminthe
frontofthehouse.HetoldhischildrentoplantatreeeachpersonThefathersaidtothechildren,"Whosetree
growsbest,Iwillbuyhimorherafavoritegift"Theboyalsowantedtogethisfather'sgift.Butseeinghisbrothers
andsisterscarryingwatertowaterthetreeshappily,hehada(erribleidea:hehoped(hetreeheplantedwoulddie
soon.Soheneverattendedtoil.
Afewdayslater,whenthelilllsboywenttoseehistreeagain,hewassurprisedtofinditnotonlydidn'tdie.
butalsogrewsomefreshleaves,andcomparedwiththetreesofhisbrotherandsister,hisappearedgreenerand
morevital.Hisfatherkepthispromise,boughtthelittleboyhisfavoritegiftandsaidtohim,"fromthetreeyou
planted,youwillbecomeagreatpersonwhenyougrowup."
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2,請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
ParagraphI:
Oneday,thelittleboylayonthebed,wonderingwhyhistreecangrowsowell.
Paragraph2:
Sincethen,thelittleboybecamedifferent.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】
本文以人物為線索展開,講這了FranklinRoosevelt在父親的關(guān)愛下如何變得樂觀的故事。愛是生命中
最好的養(yǎng)料:即使只是一勺清水,它都能使生命之樹茁壯成長(zhǎng)。也許那棵樹不夠好,也許那棵樹那么細(xì),
甚至有些脆弱,但只要有愛的滋養(yǎng),它就可以很好地活躍起來,甚至長(zhǎng)成參天大樹。
【參考范文】
Onepossibleversion:
Paragraph1:
Oneday,thelittleboylayonbed,wonderingwhyhistreecangrowsowell,hesuddenlyrecalledwhatthe
biologyteacheroncesaid,plantsgeneralgrowatnight.Whynotgotoseethetree?Whenhecametoihecourtyard
ontiptoe,hefoundhisfatherwassplashingsomethingunderhistreewithaladle.Allofasudden,heunderstood:
hisfatherhadbeensecretlyfertilizinghissmalltree!Hereturnedtohisroom,tearsrunningdownhisfacewithout
restraint.
Paragraph2:
Sincethen,thelittleboybecamedifferent.Beingstrongandconfident,heovercameallthedifficultieshewas
facedwith.Decadespassed,hewaselectedPresidentoftheUnitedS:ates.HisnamewasFranklinRoosevelt.Love
isthebestnourishmentoflife;evenifitisjustoneladlefulofclearwater,itcanmake(hetreeoflifethrive.Maybe
thattreeisinconspicuous;perhapsthatthetreeissothin,andevensemewithered,butaslongasthereis
nourishmentoflove,itcanflourishandevengrowintotoweringtrees.
【精選真題04】
(2020?丹陽(yáng)高級(jí)中學(xué)高二期末)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容而所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的短文。
“Number7,JobieNymble,takesthelead,^^criedtheannouncer.44Justonemorehurdleand…"Cheerserupted.
“JobieNymblefromRiversideMiddleSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirfs100-meterhurdles!”
“Countychampionships,herewecome,“screamedJobie,pattingherwornneon-greentrackshoss.Theywere
burstingattheseams,butshedidn'tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.uNcxtSaturday,we're
takinghomethegold,^^Jobicwhisperedtoherluckytrackshoes,excitedlyretyingthem.Pop!Shesighedasshe
staredatthebroken-offpieceofshoelacesdanglingbetweenherfingers.
“Don'tforget,guys,“chirpedMarisol,oneofherteammates.uMybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatHidden
Park.”
“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar.,,jokedJobieinherbestrobotvoice.
Nextweekendcouldn'tcomesoonenough.Jobiewasexcitedallweeklong.Attrackpractice,sheleapedover
thosehurdlesfasterthanshe'deverleapedbefore.
ThedayofMarisol'sparty,Jobieputonherfavoriteoutfitandherluckytrackshoes."Perfect."Shesmiledat
herselfinthemirror.
ThepartywasinfullswingwhenJobiearrived.Shesawtwoofherteammatesrushingtowardher,breathless
andbarefoot.t4Comeon?,theysaidexcitedly,44Youhavetotrytheslide”.“Slide?WhatSuddenly,shesawit.
TheBIGGESTinflatableslideshehadeverseenwasonthefarsideof(hepark.Withoutthinkingtwice,Jobie
threwasidehershoesandruntowardtheslide.Itsladderstretchedtotheskybutshereach
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