冀教八下英語Unit 8《單元寫作》課件

單元寫作自然災(zāi)害Unit8Naturaldisasters寫作維度本單元的寫作主題是“自然災(zāi)害和防范”，一般涉及以下幾個(gè)方面：(1)描述某類自然災(zāi)害的特點(diǎn)與影響(2)給出特定場景下的防災(zāi)建議(3)敘述一次災(zāi)害經(jīng)歷或模擬逃生過程等。寫作模板自然災(zāi)害第一步，介紹這次自然災(zāi)害的結(jié)果；第二步，介紹我們國家是如何應(yīng)對這次自然災(zāi)害的；第三步，介紹作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做什么。黃金語料(從教材內(nèi)外積累好句)開頭段①Earthquakesalwayshappensuddenly,soitisdifficulttowarnpeopleaboutthem.②Disastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometown.③InDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstorm.中間段①Whenyou’reinside,youmustn’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.②Youshouldstayawayfromwindowsandheavyfurniture.③Thesnowstormwasachallenge,butwitheveryone’seffort,weovercameit.④What’smore,youmustkeepcalm,bebraveandhelpful.⑤Andtheydidtheirbesttofightagainst...⑥Manytreesfelldown,blockingtheroadsanddestroyingpowerlines.⑦Ourcountrytookquickactiontodealwiththesnowstorm.⑧Whenyouareoutside,you’dbetterkeepawayfrom...結(jié)尾段①Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.②Asstudents,weshouldalsodoourpart.③Weshouldlearntounderstandhowtodealwithnaturaldisasters.經(jīng)典例題(從經(jīng)典例題學(xué)會審題)2023年12月，我們國家的部分地區(qū)遭遇了多年不遇的罕見暴雪。請以“TheSnowstorm”為題，根據(jù)提示并結(jié)合所學(xué)內(nèi)容，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語作文。提示詞：experience，destroy(破壞)，falldown，traffic(交通)，send①Whatwastheresultofthesnowstorm?②Whatdidourcountrydowiththesnowstorm?③Whatshouldwedoasastudent?TheSnowstorm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________審要點(diǎn)：雪災(zāi)結(jié)果、國家的應(yīng)對措施、學(xué)生應(yīng)采取的行動審體裁：記敘文（夾敘夾議）審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)審人稱：第一人稱、第三人稱精彩范文展示TheSnowstormInDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstormthatwasrarelyseenbefore.Manytreesfelldown,blockingtheroadsanddestroyingpowerlines.Thetrafficwasseriouslyaffected,andmanypeoplehadtostayathome.①In2023,Canadaexperiencedmanybigforestfires,affectinganareaofover60,000squarekilometres.（教材P106）Ourcountrytookquickactiontodealwiththesnowstorm.Thegovernmentsentrescueteamstocleartheroadsandrestorethepowersupply.Theyalsoprovidedfoodandwarmclothesforthoseinneed.②ThePLAtroopsfoughtagainstthisterriblefloodandprotectedmillionsofpeoplefromdrowning.（教材P106）Asstudents,weshouldalsodoourpart.Wecanhelpclearthesnowinourneighborhoodorvolunteertohelpthoseaffected.Weshouldlearntounderstandhowtodealwithnaturaldisasters.③Fortyphoons,weshouldstayindoors,awayfromwindowsandfromanydangerousobjectsoutside.（教材P100）Thesnowstormwasachallenge,butwitheveryone’seffort,weovercameit.【亮點(diǎn)詞塊】takequickaction立刻行動providesth.forsb.為某人提供某物thoseinneed有需要的人witheveryone’seffort在大家的努力下【高分句子】InDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstormthatwasrarelyseenbefore.(定語從句)2023年12月，我國部分地區(qū)經(jīng)歷了一場罕見的強(qiáng)暴雪。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練自然災(zāi)害時(shí)有發(fā)生，而且發(fā)生得很突然，很難預(yù)警。請你以“地震”為主題，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇主題報(bào)告，給同學(xué)們提供一些地震逃生的建議。InsideOutside*Don’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.*Stayawayfrombridges...*Hideunderthetable,butstayawayfrom...*Ifyouareinacar,stayinside.*Whenthegroundstopsshaking,...*Inthemountains,becarefulof...Staycalm,bebrave...注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文詞數(shù)：不少于80。2.短文必須包含以上內(nèi)容，但可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。Whattodoinanearthquake__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文參考WhattodoinanearthquakeEarthquakesalwayshappensuddenly,soitisdifficulttowarnpeopleaboutthem.Hereissomeadviceforyoutokeepsafe.Whenyou’reinside,youmustn’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.Youcanhideunderatable.Andyoushouldstayawayfromwindowsandheavyfurniture.You’dbetterleavethebuildingquicklywhenthegroundstopsshaking.Butdon’tusethelifts.Whenyouareoutside,you’dbetterkeepawayfrombridges,trees,streetlightsorpowerlines.Whenyou’reinacaroronabus,youshouldstayinside.Whenyouareinthemounta